Utauloid's Voice too Sharp. Fix? (Sample Uploaded)

[TarikD]

I've created an Utauloid based off of my voice. Its only CV right now. I'm in the process of learning about VCV.

I had to remake him from scratch the first time though because he sounded drunk and slurred when he would sing.

This time I'm very pleased with the improvement and clarity of his voice, but I'm having the opposite problem now. The beginning of each letter he sings is very sharp which causes some faster songs to sound really jumpy. Nothing flows nicely.

What can I do to soften it? I just need to know where the problem is and I'll figure something out.

I've downloaded this UST a while ago so I'm sorry I don't remember the creator to credit. Will take down if its a problem.
https://soundcloud.com/tarikd-1/sample

EDIT: November 6th, 2013

Thanks for the tips everyone. Since I posted this in the forum I've undergone great improvement (always room for more) and would like to thank everyone who attempted to help. Here's another CV sample:

https://soundcloud.com/tarikd-1/pierrot-utau-sample

 

[Umbreon126]

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[TarikD]

*Sample uploaded*

 

[Umbreon126]

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[TarikD]

Wow, thanks. Improving how they sound actually helped a lot more than I thought it would. There's always room for improvement though. Up next... VCV...

 

[Masa]

So... the problem you're having is that his transitions are choppy?

From what he sounds like I'm pretty sure that's the oto. You might want to move the green lines (overlap) to the right a little bit, see if that helps .

 

[Kiyoteru]

Like above, OTO and pronunciation. Maybe a pop filter could help soften your consonants.

 

[TarikD]

Thanks for the help. Especially adjusting the overlap. I've also improved the OTO and pronunciation and uploaded a new sample just in case anyone was curious.