[WIP] Home Sweet Home [FFV Remix]

Forra Bard

Momo's Minion
[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/kristin-troilo/utau-home-sweet-home-mune[/soundcloud]

Heavy WIP, I haven't added any harmonies or anything really to the UST other than create it.

Lyrics:
僕らの家は燃やしった
今僕らどこに行かない
はるかなる故郷は終わった
心で住んだと思います

今はくびすを返しない
そして敵と戦います

はるかなる故郷

僕のラストバトルに行って
みんなは疲れています
次は誰一人知らない
家に帰郷してください

Romaji:
Bokura no ie wa moyashikata
Ima bokura doko ni ikanai
Harukanaru kokyou wa owatta
Kokoro de sunda to omoimasu

Ima wa kubisu o kaeshinai
Soshite teki to tatakaimasu

Harukanaru kokyou

Boku no LAST BATTLE ni itte
Minna wa tsukareteimasu
Tsugi wa dare hitori shiranai
Ie ni kikyoushite kudasai

English/What I’m trying to say

Our homes were burned down
Now we do not know where we will go
Home sweet home is no longer there
But I think it still lives within my heart

Now there is no way to return
So will fight my enemies

Home Sweet Home

I go to my final battle
Everyone I know is exhausted
What comes next no one knows
Please return to our homes [I hope we will return to our home world]

Do these seem okay?