Critique Requested [UTAU Cover] Soleil (Yamine Renri)

[QBB123XX]

My first cover shared here!

Song: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QX0HwLYXpJcc9yiwt45xaUunTOfhDY-7/view?usp=sharing

UST: NeeMiSo
Tuning/Mix: Me
Original: Soleil by Travolta-P ft. Kagamine Rin

I haven't been learning UTAU for very long, so I'd like to know what you think of this! Any feedback is appreciated!

 

[atomicreih]

My first cover shared here!

Song: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QX0HwLYXpJcc9yiwt45xaUunTOfhDY-7/view?usp=sharing

UST: NeeMiSo
Tuning/Mix: Me
Original: Soleil by Travolta-P ft. Kagamine Rin

I haven't been learning UTAU for very long, so I'd like to know what you think of this! Any feedback is appreciated!

The voice and tuning itself are great and sound good, but the mixing needs a little more work as the voice still sounds separate from the instrumental