Critique Requested 【Hikaru Itone & Hitomi Akane】Feathers Across The Seasons 【UTAU cover】 (TEST)

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Hello everybody!! I just recently covered Feathers Across the Seasons with my UTAU I recently created new VCV voicebanks for them.
Please criticize me! Especially on the mixing! I need to learn because I'm still pretty new to this! (But please be gentle :'D )
I'm gonna try to embed the cover (even though I'm unfortunately not very good at that, let's hope it works-)

 

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yesssss it worked haha >:D

 

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Hope its ok to post a month later :p

Not sure how much you recorded, but the higher notes are a bit touch-and-go; some she hits really naturally, some it doesn't quite feel right. The Ts are really noticeably accented; I've never been able to consistently avoid that when I go soft, but they should be very short, air only passing enough to part the tongue with the roof of the mouth. It should form almost exactly like a "D" sound.