Thoughts on Hitomi's design?

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Ruko's Ruffians
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Hiiii everyone!!!! I made an utau about a few days ago!! These are her designs, her main one, and her alternate! What do you guys think?
(I don't know how to put images in my posts so I'll just put links!)

 

lunari162

Defoko's Slaves
Defender of Defoko
You can upload an image by clicking the photo icon in the text format options (next to the smiley face; this asks you for a URL) or by clicking "Upload a File," which is next to "Post Reply" and "Preview."
The Imgur images aren't showing up for me, so I can't give any feedback right now. Sorry ^^;
 
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Ruko's Ruffians
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You can upload an image by clicking the photo icon in the text format options (next to the smiley face; this asks you for a URL) or by clicking "Upload a File," which is next to "Post Reply" and "Preview."
The Imgur images aren't showing up for me, so I can't give any feedback right now. Sorry ^^;
Oh my gosh thank you!! I'll try to fix it right now, sorry about that!
[doublepost=1571531378][/doublepost]I can't seem to edit the post right now so I'll just put the picture in a reply and hope I can edit it later ^^; I feel like BooBoo the fool!



hitomi main.png Hitomi Akane ALT.png
 

lunari162

Defoko's Slaves
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Ooh, I love those designs! The first one is so cute, and the second one is very cool!
In terms of feedback, the only thing that looks slightly off to me is the polka dots in the second one. They still look fine, though ^^