Critique Requested [UTAU Original] Bygones [Al!ce.16]

melinoe

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Uh, hello?
I know I was barely here before I suddenly disappeared but I'm back! Hopefully for a while!

In that year of absence I've managed to put together this original track. I'd appreciate any feedback you are willing to offer. Seriously. Rip it apart if you see fit, I want to know what needs to be improved for upcoming originals. I mean, I have things that bothered me, but your opinions can help me hone in on what's important.

Thanks so much!
-meli
 
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Cosmickinsey

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I really like the way it sounds! But I think I'd mix the vocals a little louder, or BGM quieter, I can barely make out the vocals ^^'
 

DannyDA

Teto's Territory


Uh, hello?
I know I was barely here before I suddenly disappeared but I'm back! Hopefully for a while!

In that year of absence I've managed to put together this original track. I'd appreciate any feedback you are willing to offer. Seriously. Rip it apart if you see fit, I want to know what needs to be improved for upcoming originals. I mean, I have things that bothered me, but your opinions can help me hone in on what's important.

Thanks so much!

-meli


It's very great but you need to increase the volume of the vocals, I can't hear the words clearly.