I have been trying to finish an older song I wrote and I’ve been a little unsure how to approach it since it’s been so long, the plan I had for the song is almost a little foreign to me (That’s what happens when you procrastinate, oops) I don’t entirely remember the chords or a lot of my original idea.
As a result, I worry the melody might be strange on the song/ boring? I am a little unsatisfied with it, but I also feel I might be biased against it since I wrote it, LEL
(The really bad midi piano/vibraphone is the stand-in for the vocal melody. It wasn’t really like, properly mixed in so hopefully it can still be distinguished ok. Though it might not portray the polyphonic portions well)
https://clyp.it/srq5ybgz
Anyway, I would appreciate any feedback on how the melody sounds to you.
I honestly feel iffy about the mix too, so honestly feedback on anything I wouldn’t mind either ^^;;
Thanks for any opinions/feedback !
As a result, I worry the melody might be strange on the song/ boring? I am a little unsatisfied with it, but I also feel I might be biased against it since I wrote it, LEL
(The really bad midi piano/vibraphone is the stand-in for the vocal melody. It wasn’t really like, properly mixed in so hopefully it can still be distinguished ok. Though it might not portray the polyphonic portions well)
https://clyp.it/srq5ybgz
Anyway, I would appreciate any feedback on how the melody sounds to you.
I honestly feel iffy about the mix too, so honestly feedback on anything I wouldn’t mind either ^^;;
Thanks for any opinions/feedback !