Juni - Vote and Reviews design

Discussion in 'Media Reviews/Critiques' started by Utaka, Apr 21, 2017.

  1. Utaka

    Utaka Momo's Minion

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    Hi everyone, it's been a long time since I didn't post on the forum, nevertheless I need your help!
    I am currently redesigning my male UTAU Juni for his ACT3, I made two versions to be able to collect votes and also critics.
    I just need you to answer 1 for the first design and 2 for the second one and why.
    If you also have suggestions, accessories to add, modify an item ... etc, do not hesitate!

    Here's the design : https://app.box.com/s/rmf8xvhknpz94noh7wqmxymenbssfefe

    I thank you in advance!
    PS : I'm French, sorry for my English
     
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  3. Soursop the fruit

    Soursop the fruit That fruity buddy Defender of Defoko

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    Welcome back to UF!~
    Talking about your design, i vote for the 2nd. I love both shoes and jacket(it's jacket, right?) they make him look alot cooler.
    Plus i like the color gradation too :love:
    My advice, i think he needs some silver-ish accesories for his jacket/jeans or blue accent on some part of his outfit. `u`
     
  4. Utaka

    Utaka Momo's Minion

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    Thank you!
    Yes this is a jacket, but it works like a Perfecto.
    I also liked the color gradation, I added it to avoid getting too dark :smile:
    I will see silver-ish accessories and blue additions!
    Thank you for your reviews :smile:
     
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  5. Melomad

    Melomad Teto's Territory

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    I like the shoes in the first design but also I love the perfecto in the second.
    It would be nice if there were more contrast in this design. Maybe try to get some white or light blue here and there.
     
  6. Utaka

    Utaka Momo's Minion

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    I will see for more color variants then, thank you for your opinion!
     
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  7. Oblivion772

    Oblivion772 Praise The Sun! Defender of Defoko

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    I like the first a bit more, but I must say, I feel like there should be some color other than blue. Don't get me wrong, I like blue, and I like the design, but they are all very similar in shade.
     
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  8. Utaka

    Utaka Momo's Minion

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    I will try other colors. The blue and purple were his basics colors, so I had left as such since its creation.. Thank you for your advice !
     

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