Tips on my new song ;A:

Sonianjeriku Kagamine

Ruko's Ruffians
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If the piano is the Vocal Meoldy, i have 2 points :
1) You are not in the tempo sometimes except if you know do you made.
2) If you can edit the piano part, if you are begginer, avoid the black notes on the piano roll.
But the song sound cool. I think you can add more synth^^
 
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melobuniiP

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If the piano is the Vocal Meoldy, i have 2 points :
1) You are not in the tempo sometimes except if you know do you made.
2) If you can edit the piano part, if you are begginer, avoid the black notes on the piano roll.
But the song sound cool. I think you can add more synth^^
thankies, Im not a beginner, beginner. ive been doing this but no vocaloid ;v;
Black notes are my favorite
I cant seem to fix it myself! ;o; I tried but it felt even more off
 

Mrs.Peach

Married Sugar Mama
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hmm your timing is a little off and you mixed white keys and black keys together... you've got the right idea but you need to make sure everything is timed and uniform... making music is all about patterns. Generally things change in blocks of 4 (my fave is a block of 8).

Generally you should only use the same colour keys. I my honest opinion. You should stick to white keys for the time being as they offer your more room to play with.

Just like with any piece of art, reference everything and make remixes! Remixes are a good foundation to start with as you already have everything done you are just making it your own.

Please, continue your musical endeavour.
 

GothAmaterasu

Ruko's Ruffians
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I agree with the other comments, it sounds a bit eerie... but I like it xD
Fixing which notes you use (black/white), the vocal's timing, and adding more synth/instruments would probably do the trick :3
Definitely play around with patterns and variations, and choose what you like best. :3 Even if you don't feel like you've got it the way you want it now, just come back to it later.
If you need help with timing the vocals, I'm sure you can ask someone here. :3