Thoughts on UTAU and Revamp

Sahawi

Teto's Territory
So I currently have an UTAU which I am thinking of revamping.
Here are her Designs.
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[Sumine Tonbo] - [Old]
[Songs]

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[S.U.M.I] - [New WIP]
[Voice]

I would like to know your opinions on the voice, the design and which voice would suit which design.
Thank you, lovelies~
 

Runegod

Teto's Territory
your links are broken i think, but i found your soundcloud and found the samples anyway

sumi def sounds a little more soft and feminine than sumine (haha only 1 syllable away from my utau xD) its a liiitle hard to tell because sumine has acappella demos while sumi doesn't, and her voice is a little quiet. so you might wanna give acapella samples for sumi

i think the respective voices suit both designs how you have already assigned them , so thats cool.
for the designs themselves, id recommend a similarity between them to "tie them together" as your group of utau - If you want to do that. one thing i already see from the designs is that both have a star on them somewhere, on charms or on sumine's hat. if to your liking, you could accentuate the star themes on both thier designs. maybe some space star theme, nebula and comet or something //shot i love space gomen

for sumine, the colors are abundant, for one. but i dont really think it takes away from the design very much in this case. It makes her seem energetic and a little eccentric. her voice has a slight boyish edge to it compared to sumi, and the sneakers and sharp dyed hair i think adds to this tomboyish look. which i think is pretty nice. i might sugest to clean her deisgn up a little color-wise, and give a look at color theory to co-ordinate a little bit. but thats all, and i think she looks good as is anyway :3

sumi is harder to critique because she has no color on her design, but i think its very cute. i cant find much to say negatively on this design, i think its nice

one thing thats a little confusing is that one is Sumine, and one is SUMI, they share the first two syllables and romaji spelling (even if one is in acronym format with the dots at all.) So you may want to think about differentiating them because i originally thought that sumi was act2 of sumine (is she...? it kinda seems like it now that i reread it.... so ignore me if i got it all wrong @_@ )

Sorry this is so long i feel bad for not posting in months and that guilt is pouring itself out into words on this post. xD